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June 7, 2013 at 9:26 pm #207688
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GuestI am posting something from our youngest daughter who is almost 11 and just finished 5th Grade– graduating from elementary school on her way to young adulthood. She wrote the following poem this year in her Language Arts class, and I read it for the first time last night. She got no help or input whatsoever from anyone in our family. It is an example of why she was given the award for outstanding performance in Language Arts at her school. I am proud of her – not just for her ability as a writer but, more importantly, for what this poem says about her and her vision:
Quote:We may be children and teens,
But we can be reigning queens.
They say we can’t help;
They think we will melt,
But we are solid.
We have knowledge.
If you join me,
We can flee
So many times of war.
Join me from door to door.
I will change the world.
No one can stop me.
I will feed the poor.
If you follow through,
Then we can win
and rule the population.
Though we must wait,
It’s very fine;
We wait for a reason,
And that reason is
That we don’t have the power . . . yet.
But when we do,
I hope we will
Change the world.
Maybe you could
Just speak up.
You could help by
Making Earth cleaner,
Safer, kinder, and a
Better place to live.
We have a great amount
Of stingy people
Who just won’t share.
Why do so many people
Leave their families
When they could be happy
If only they cared?
If only we weren’t
So proud of ourselves,
So many more families
Could be happy.
Why not just make peace
Between other countries?
Ambassadors, Presidents,
Children, Adults –
What’s the difference
When we are all human?
So many people think
They are better than another.
Is that really necessary?
Is that why there is
So much name calling?
Why do we title
Everyone else and point out
So many small problems?
Help to stop all
Of this horrible behavior.
Help stop pollution;
So many animals
Have to suffer,
Because we throw
Our trash in rivers, woods
And other different places.
So, stop smoking,
And start spreading
Joy instead of grief.
Stop hurting children;
Take care of them.
Stop using drugs.
Please join me
And change our lives.
I will change the world.
Will you help me?
June 8, 2013 at 4:29 am #269857Anonymous
GuestThat is a remarkable poem for a such young lady. Ray you have some fantastic daughters. Blessings to all of you. June 18, 2013 at 7:37 pm #269858Anonymous
GuestVery good poem! June 19, 2013 at 10:22 am #269859Anonymous
GuestI am moved by this poem, coming from someone so young. I’m humbled by her insights and the potential they posses. Congratulation Ray on the great job raising such a wise child. -
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