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    I am posting something from our youngest daughter who is almost 11 and just finished 5th Grade – graduating from elementary school on her way to young adulthood. She wrote the following poem this year in her Language Arts class, and I read it for the first time last night. She got no help or input whatsoever from anyone in our family. It is an example of why she was given the award for outstanding performance in Language Arts at her school.

    I am proud of her – not just for her ability as a writer but, more importantly, for what this poem says about her and her vision:

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    We may be children and teens,

    But we can be reigning queens.

    They say we can’t help;

    They think we will melt,

    But we are solid.

    We have knowledge.

    If you join me,

    We can flee

    So many times of war.

    Join me from door to door.

    I will change the world.

    No one can stop me.

    I will feed the poor.

    If you follow through,

    Then we can win

    and rule the population.

    Though we must wait,

    It’s very fine;

    We wait for a reason,

    And that reason is

    That we don’t have the power . . . yet.

    But when we do,

    I hope we will

    Change the world.

    Maybe you could

    Just speak up.

    You could help by

    Making Earth cleaner,

    Safer, kinder, and a

    Better place to live.

    We have a great amount

    Of stingy people

    Who just won’t share.

    Why do so many people

    Leave their families

    When they could be happy

    If only they cared?

    If only we weren’t

    So proud of ourselves,

    So many more families

    Could be happy.

    Why not just make peace

    Between other countries?

    Ambassadors, Presidents,

    Children, Adults –

    What’s the difference

    When we are all human?

    So many people think

    They are better than another.

    Is that really necessary?

    Is that why there is

    So much name calling?

    Why do we title

    Everyone else and point out

    So many small problems?

    Help to stop all

    Of this horrible behavior.

    Help stop pollution;

    So many animals

    Have to suffer,

    Because we throw

    Our trash in rivers, woods

    And other different places.

    So, stop smoking,

    And start spreading

    Joy instead of grief.

    Stop hurting children;

    Take care of them.

    Stop using drugs.

    Please join me

    And change our lives.

    I will change the world.

    Will you help me?

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    That is a remarkable poem for a such young lady. Ray you have some fantastic daughters. Blessings to all of you.

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    Anonymous
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    Very good poem!

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    Anonymous
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    I am moved by this poem, coming from someone so young. I’m humbled by her insights and the potential they posses. Congratulation Ray on the great job raising such a wise child.

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