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    My second son, Jeff, wrote a poem in high school a few years ago about which I had forgotten, until my mother e-mailed it to me and my siblings yesterday.

    We talk a lot here about leaving behind childish views and, as Hawkgirl says, becoming “adults of God” – but this poem is a reminder to me that part of spiritual maturity is regaining a bit of the unobstructed wonder and acceptance of childhood we almost always lose when we move into a world that demands more than just a bit of cynicism and self-protection. I really like the examples Jeff used, since I think they have fascinating symbolic meaning, especially with a religious application.

    Knowing Jeff, it wouldn’t surprise me at all if he chose those images for that very reason.


    SWEET BLISS

    Childhood is being afraid of the dark . . .

    and believing a night light will scare away the monsters.

    Childhood is bringing home a wild animal . . .

    and asking if you can keep it.

    Childhood is digging for worms and fossils . . .

    in the playground at school.

    Childhood is chasing down the ice cream truck on a hot summer day . . .

    no matter how far you have to run to catch it.

    Childhood is playing with anyone . . .

    and not caring about origin or orientation.

    Childhood is . . .

    sweet bliss.

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    Very sweet poem and so true. I really miss the simplness of childhood.

    #261042
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    I want to extrapolate a bit on the poem from my own life’s perspective:


    I am not afraid of the dark . . .

    because I have constructed a night light that scares away the monsters.

    I am able to entertain thoughts that others see as “wild animals” . . .

    because I have had so much practice handling them in a controlled environment and now can handle them on my own.

    I like digging for worms (common things) and fossils (hidden things) . . .

    even in the most common places where others play without realizing what is all around but unseen by them.

    I enjoy chasing down fulfilling things, even when it’s hot . . .

    no matter how far I have to run to catch them.

    I find great joy in interacting with and learning from anyone . . .

    and not caring about origin, orientation or perspective.

    My life is . . .

    sweet bliss (because it is uniquely mine).

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    Thanks for sharing that Ray!

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    Anonymous
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    I came across this post today and am bumping it up for our new participants to read.

    #261044
    Anonymous
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    Thanks Ray! A lovely poem with a great self application.

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