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I’m attaching a copy in MS Word format. I would really love everyone’s input. I rearranged the topics into a different order to group them and make a better flow. I added material, and I did a LOT of text editing, removing the free-form, casual, flow-of-thought grammar style. I am still going to have a couple people proof read it, like my sister who is a journalist. Feel FREE to pick it apart in that regard. I just can’t stare at it anymore and see my own mistakes at this point.
ALSO, feel free to critique the content or viewpoints, suggest additions, or let me know if I am waaaay off base with anything.
I still need to finish the Priesthood Blessings and Word of Wisdom sections, both completely new content. I’ll post those separately as I finish them this week.
It was too hard to edit such a large document in an HTML editor, and I don’t own a copy of what John used originally. After we set the content in stone, I will go back and make it look “pretty” for HTML. I want to have two versions — one for web reading, the other for print (for people to carry around with them).
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